leaves twirling in the wind,
whirling around from Heaven's send.
stars shining in the skies,
reflected in your eyes.
trees laughing on the ground,
whispering without a sound.
clouds dancing up above,
the greatest symbol of one's love.
lights streaming through the rain,
bright things to keep all sane.
the moon hiding between the trees,
shielding it's light with the greatest of ease.
through another's eyes to see the world,
around our minds the fog has curled.
sent to a place to hide away,
forever here i'll spend the day.
of all the things we've ever known,
the thoughts of another cloud our own.
A contest entry
- Creativity Please by deleteit.
1800 points, ended July 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What an amazing take on this concept. Your insight makes your words flow.
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Thank you. Once again, one of my 4AM writes. Lol.
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This is really good! I would type a part of it that I thought was my favorite, but I like it all! Very creative You're a great writer!
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Thanks, <(^_^)> I just wrote what came to me while I was staring out the window. (It was late at night, as when all my good ideas come)
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lol yeah I can relate there and you're welcome
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awesomeness lol I'm glad someone can relate
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The visions that your words create are absolutely wonderful! It was as if I was on my own adventure through these scenes. Thanks so much for entering and the best of luck
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