To escape the world and break my silence,
I indulge on substance unknown to all but prophets.
Reality it may be or even just a vision.
This insight comes from a blissful essence.
Through a journey down my misfortunes,
Fear to joy then to uncertain thoughts of being.
Am I the soul, the body, or just the electrons of the mind.
Seeking only to obtain answers to my questions,
I escape from the chains of existence,
Only to find again that reality is a lesson.
A contest entry
- Creativity Please by deleteit.
1800 points, ended July 19, 2007, 14 entries
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I like the messege it conveys. A journey ventured within moments of time, even reality or memories to reveal the lesson overlooked or to even remember a feeling once forgotten. At least that is what I gain from this. Thank you for entering and the best of luck
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