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More Than Full

 

I can never remember the smells of past breaking of fasts
  the exact taste of each moaning morsel, or tantalizing tidbit.

   My brain tends to forget the forgettable
       and romanticize the unsatisfying.

I'd been full but never truly fed
   not till that savage buffet covered in beautiful hides.
Yes, God yes, there had been scandalous moments of pleasure
   the feeling of being stuffed till I could taste it in my throat.
And while the meals had settled the stomach
    and fulfilled the senses to the point of near bursting,

Nothing has ever had the same mirrored effect as this spread.
Nothing has filled while making me reach for seconds;

Fourths.

Never ending gluttony.

Nibbling the ribs while grasping at thighs, not sure where to start;
Swallowing the wholesome meats, groaning in effort;
Licking the tangy sauces that shut the eyes in ooohing wonderment.

See my left hand, meet my right, gaze at my gaping mouth-
  my weapons of choice, my treasured allies in this conquest.
I sit, stuffing all I can reach while scanning other plates
   trying to formulate a logistic declaration of battle on the menu;
Till even my mouth trembles, engorged
   and my legs quake from mind blowing satisfaction.

Even still, I gum and bite, moaning, overwhelmed,
enjoying every aspect till even joy makes no sense.
Till my body groans in protest, begging for a break, even as I tip another yell inducing spoonful towards my mouth.

 

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There was a man who once whetted my appetite for all sorts of wonderful things!

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  • Tirrell
    August 15, 2007

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    intresting prose, as for the food stufs or metaphors I took quite at their surface, it made me hungry. Reminded me of good southern barba-Q... Nice prose with excellent imagry.


    • AllOuta
      August 15, 2007
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      That made me giggle, because I actually got a few complaints that this was to erotic and that it needed an Adult tagline. For you just to see a meal,

      *giggles* thanks! made my day