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your own mistake;;

im not going to apologize for my absentice in your life,
you seemed rather content with pushing me away.
i'm not going to beg for you to stick around anymore,
especially if i'm going to be ignored.
you seem to have the mind frame that you are suppose to recieve everything in the world,
that falls going to hurt when your pedstal breaks.

Please tell me what you think

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  • aeolia
    November 5, 2007
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    "im not going to apologize for my absentice in your life," -- I'm; absence.

    "you seem to have the mind frame that you are suppose to recieve everything in the world," supposed; receive. I'd suggest replacing that comma with a semicolon.

    "that falls going to hurt when your pedstal breaks." -- fall's; pedestal.

    Good idea overall.

  • Underneathitall
    July 17, 2007
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    nice