Living days and breathing nights
All alone in your bedroom
Thinking slowly, thinking hard
About my choice.
When together, we're inseparable
Our lives are intertwined
But when we are apart
I hear his voice.
How did it come to to this
You're with him, and I'm alone
Yet it feels so good inside
When I'm with you.
You feel the same with me
Yet with him, you're set to stay
So I guess it seems that I'm
Just something new.
You're everything to me
My life, my joy, my every being
Yet I'm just an open mind
And a friendly voice
So I have to come and ask
Is it me you want, or him?
For this thing called love is not
Multiple Choice.
Author notes
“Never allow someone to be your priority while allowing yourself to be their option”
A contest entry
- 1750 points available by Cinnarry.
1750 points, ended July 22, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great powerful poem
keep up the great work.
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LOVED IT!
I like this. It's really good. Love isn't multiple choice. Although I bet it would be better if it were. lol
Dani aka misty
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Amazing Sam
I love you hun ^_^ Great job here!
You have lots of talent, and I hope you are doing well my friend.
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awesome
this is really really good! I liked the opening line "living days breathing nights" well done...
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Thanks, this is by far one of my better creations
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Life is so screwed, Sam. But the poem is really great. Love can suck, like now
But guess what, remember when you told me your perfect girl was out there somewhere and you were going to wait for her? Well, if Kitty isn't that perfect girl who chooses you then your perfect girl is somewhere else.
So cheer up ol' boy.
I love you.
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"How did it come to to this
You're with him, and I'm alone
Yet it feels so good inside
When I'm with you"
Gah. Sam. It's not my place to put a label on other people's emotions. You describe a very confusing situation with great clarity. I quoted the lines that touched me the most due to my own screwed up personal issues. *sigh* Needless to say I don't understand exactly how you feel...but I do. It's kind of sick the situations life throws are you.
Great write, Sam. Good luck in the contest.For the record, you probably invented the groove.
♥Em
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Awhhh dude SammyBoy this is like, really really super good. If I ever hear you say your stuff sucks again, I'll keel j00.
I really really like the...meh, I like it all! I would give a critical comment but I'm too tired to think of anything constructive. But this is really really amazing Sam
Is it about Kitty or just an option for the contest?
ily
Gl in teh contest
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Kitty
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*huggles*
I love you Sam
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I really like this! Good luck! ^_^
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Thanks, I just started getting back into the groove of things as far as writing It's been a while
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haha I don't think you need to get into the groove...you're in it.
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