Lime green soda pop;
we're singing
lullabies in the backseat
(romantic isn't it?)
I could be Alice
(You can be the cheshire cat),
finding wonderland in your ankles
[turned towards me]
&& counting down to
m
i
d
n
i
g
h
t.
But for now it's
11:11
(Make a wish, darling).
...
I wish for
Kerosene lollipops &&
world peace
(I'll be your
candycane pageant queen).
You called me innocent,
when we were sticking to the leather seats.
I called you [[skin-tight]],
But our lips were locked,
like the breakroom coffee machine.
You told me I was beautiful and
promised that I'd sparkle in the dark.
Author notes
Option 6, #1
Lullaby, Backseat, Romance, Wonderland, 11:11, Kerosene, Promise, Sparkle, Dark.
This is my attempt at dirty-pretty. Treat it kindly...
Your Heart is My Symphony
A contest entry
- && I'd rather have a b r u i s e d pelvis;; than a //sha tte red\\ ♥ by PaintedParisPassion.
500 points, ended July 19, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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awesome. i love alice in wonderland. great useage kid. a preliminary well deserved
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I.love.this.
I made me feel awkward.
[in the good way!]....if their is a good way..
It's like my friends yaoi laugh...
....
Don't ask...
I loved this, and you a such a wonderful writer.
'I wish for
Kerosene lollipops &&
world peace
(I'll be your
candycane pageant queen).'
For an attempt at this, you did it wonderfully.
Wow...
[♥]
Monica
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OMFG love, this was like...omg...it kicked ass. srsly. i am at a loss of words for this one, welcome to the preliminary list, . this was amzzzzng.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
♥
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