She never wished for much
Just simply understanding
A curious mind always wondering, looking
Her smile is radiant
Showing and pulling you in
Its been catching fish since
the first day she could flaunt it
Her only wish is to please
She wants you to be happy
She never wanted to hurt
She shies away from her own mouth
The things it says wrong
{its a fear}
She is simple in her ways
A rhythmic, rigorous drumbeat
And her walk proves confidence
Look and be jealous
Because she loves herself
And you can't seem to do so.
She lives by her rules
Presentable but rebellious at heart
And running into danger
But she'll always be there
To help you out
Friend, aquaintance, stranger.
She is to be admired
Confidence is hard to find
Her beliefs are strong
{such as modesty honors beauty}
Her head held high
She will continue to synchronize to her drum
Author notes
i chose option 18-write about yourself...this is me.
A contest entry
- Who Cares If You Like My Skin...As Long As I'm Comfortable In It by KittieLyyn.
370 points, ended July 16, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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and this was a wonderful take on you
really lets everyone see who you are
and what makes you...you
i loved the wording and descriptions and the emotions
i thought this was wonderful
well done
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good job.
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