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Gathering



Purple mountain beauty
        painted
  outside my window;

blue bird dressed trees
                chirp
      morning awakenings.


Sunday best,
  pressed
    and dressed
        for chapel chants;

Grandma's dinner,
      served at one --

                            don't be late.




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  • in-the-twilight
    July 16, 2007

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    This is beautiful Auntie Bel... I love the simplicity and the metaphor involved in this short write! Rock on! xoxo Meg


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    wow I love it, that's just how Sundays were and still are around here, and the birds fill your ears each morning. Beautiful Hugs, Bunny

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Your prompt! Ok this ones a picture, it's the view of the city where I grew up and it's so beautifully quaint, so use your imaginations and write me something wonderful, a moment in time, a romance amidst the color or just a scene of a conversation. But backdrop it with imagery.