Fragile
lace-winged beauty.
Inspired by brightest hues
rainbow bold on each side; mirrored.
Graceful.
A symbol of transformation.
Break from your chrysalis
and breathe clear air.
New life.
Author notes
This is a Butterfly Cinquain.
The syllable count is 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2.
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A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a wonderful penning. The flow is continous moving the work forward without effort. The form and shape complements the nature of the poem. The ear to sound works off the tongue.
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This is really wonderful and so creative. You painted a bright spot into my day! Congrats. on the HM!
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I do love a butterfly cinquain but am yet to attempt on.... you have captured the brilliance of what you see in wonderful tones in this piece
Karen -
Very beautiful butterfly cinquain. The word chioce is excellent, and is layered with double meaning throughout, very well done. Thank you for such a lovely entry.
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Beautiful
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