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cold outside

Damn it's cold outside why are you not here with me why the fuck am I  like a sad lonely duck in the lake as I sit here and
crumble like one damn flake, one drop here tears with fears
of this sick big world, why can we be together and rot together
like a sad puppy who lost it's way but no it's the other way
fucking high way is where we sit and wait for the signs of our sad little frowns.

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  • lildragon34
    January 14, 2008

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    Good write....

    Your express yourself in words so uniquely. Yet, I understand you completely.. Another good write, but oh so sad... I just hope you feel that things have gotten better since then... Love, dad