Lover
visit the sky.
Find me above the waves
where skyflowers thrive and we love.
This day
tangled up with wave-petal lips.
Moments fleeting freedom
locked together.
Forever.
Author notes
An entry for Poem of the Day contest
*POD
This is a Butterfly Cinquain, a modified cinquain form.
The syllable count is 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2.
In a list
A contest entry
- *POW* = Poem of the Week ~* by Arkbear.
500 points, ended July 16, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very very beautiful piece of writing, indeed. I love the layout of this. Well done. You have talent.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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This is so beautiful and goes so wonderfully with this picture. You have used such lovely imagery here and congratulations for the bronze trophy.
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this is real poetry here!!
I loved the vision of the two butterfly lovers. the picture was simply amazing!
beautiful tropghy you won!!
SilverButterfly -
OK you are instantly becoming a favourite, you have such a talent to put so much thought and meaning into every carefully chosen word....
Karen
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Very beautiful! I am butterfly lover, too.
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Splendid ~
If you have received this message, then your
Write will be considered for the Finals list ~
I want to thank you for participating
in the First *POW*, and I hope to see your Quill
brush us some more strokes next weekend ~
Very nice job ~
A very pretty BC...one of my Fav's ~
Perfect count as well ~
Bear ~
where skyflowers thrive and we love.
This day
tangled up with wave-petal lips.
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