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Butterfly Lovers

Lover
visit the sky.
Find me above the waves
where skyflowers thrive and we love.
This day
tangled up with wave-petal lips.
Moments fleeting freedom
locked together.
Forever.

Author notes

An entry for Poem of the Day contest
*POD

This is a Butterfly Cinquain, a modified cinquain form.
The syllable count is 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, 8, 6, 4, 2.

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A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    January 22, 2008

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    Very very beautiful piece of writing, indeed. I love the layout of this. Well done. You have talent.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    This is so beautiful and goes so wonderfully with this picture. You have used such lovely imagery here and congratulations for the bronze trophy.


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    this is real poetry here!!

    I loved the vision of the two butterfly lovers. the picture was simply amazing!

    beautiful tropghy you won!!


    SilverButterfly

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    OK you are instantly becoming a favourite, you have such a talent to put so much thought and meaning into every carefully chosen word....

    Karen


  • Katyv
    August 18, 2007
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    Very beautiful! I am butterfly lover, too.


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Splendid ~

    If you have received this message, then your

    Write will be considered for the Finals list ~

    I want to thank you for participating

    in the First *POW*, and I hope to see your Quill

    brush us some more strokes next weekend ~

    Very nice job ~

    A very pretty BC...one of my Fav's ~

    Perfect count as well ~

    Bear ~

    where skyflowers thrive and we love.
    This day
    tangled up with wave-petal lips.

     

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