Sitting here
wearing your hoodie
where we first kissed
the missing piece is you
the balloons are the last thing you
gave me
the ones before you left
now you're gone forever
on the dock
where i found love
now its gone
gone forever
im still crying
over you
even though it has been so long
my love and you are gone forever
the fateful night
seems stuck in my memory
you tried to tak control
and then i cry again and again
gone forever
and i only have
the pictures
and memories
seating here
holding the last thing
you gave me
the first was love
Author notes
Picture :
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2359/736.jpg?1184613452
Contest!
A contest entry
- x♥WithOut♥x (Picture Inspiration) by Sle3p.
380 points, ended July 16, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Questions? Concerns?
Comments
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beautiful
yet painful at the same time, your words were short but packed a lot of emotion, first loves are never easy to let go of, my first love died a year ago and im doing every thing i can to let go of him but, i cant.....
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I;m sorry!
and i guess i got the emotion good?
but thanks! :]
♥--T.R
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Congrats on the silver
I'm honestly surprised that I placed higher than you
I think this is awesome.
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haha thanks :]
I deffiantly thought i would get mentioned never get second !!
hahah but yours is really good!!
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Thanks... Again lol
=]
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congratulations on the silver !!! Knew you could and would do it!!!!!!!!!!!!
MamaB
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Thanks momma :]
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great write i loved it
so good to have u on ap now
love ya
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haha thanks :]
thanks i know
im SO awesome JK!!
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I really like this piece of poetry. makes you feel sadness, loved it
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Thank You!!
♥--Starry
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i'm glad you liked the picture, i realy like this its a great write it made me do sad
-maddie
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Great Write I love the last stanza -- really sums the whole piece up well Good luck in the contest! Mama Betsy
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