He gave to us all, a set of wings'
with which he wanted us to sing.
He gave to each of us a string,
in which to pull,when we need him.
He gave to us a set of wings'
in case we need to be set free.
He gave us wings' to spread so widely,
so that we could soar' 'Oh so high'!
He gave us wings to spread our love'
throughout the world, with one another.
He gave us wings to love, all sisters,and brothers,
and those wings will protect each of us.
With those wings he gave to us'
he wants us to always, look up!
He sends his love, from up-above,
and wants our full, 'faith and trust'.
So with those wings, don't waste your time'
use them wisely, to higher climb!
Never forget who gave you the wings,
to upwardly rise' and do these things!
A contest entry
- Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
800 points, ended July 29, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - softly does it by honey bear.
600 points, ended July 27, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well written.
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very lovely write
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wonderful write best of luck
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lovesong -
Hey Shirley. This poem has a very powerful message and the one that we need time to time, include myself. It is true that God has given us wings and we can rise as eagles above our circumstances. I thank you for this poem because I need it. Very excellent job and I am proud of you. God Bless you and you get 5 stars from me. Love Balthazar.
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I mean..may God bless you always...
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Oh this is such a very lovely and inspirational poem...you really live up to such a very uplifting title...each and every line of your poem is catchy...you are a really fine poet at work...may God blee you always...
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