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First Dance, Last Love (Collaboration with patsoldcat)

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The band played a waltz
I saw you there
My courage finally filled by whiskey and love.
Walking over to you
I bow
Most kindly I ask
May I have this dance beautiful lady?

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I turn to see who is making this request and smile.
I’m not sure if I can dance to this but I will try to
follow you the best I can...
if that is alright with you..

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I take your hand and lead you to the dance floor.
Pulling you close I am intoxicated by the scent of your hair
as you lay your head against my chest.
My hand encircles your waist
We slide to the music and float on the feeling of our bodies so close.

 
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Your arms feel familiar to me and I find it easy to follow your steps
I feel like my feet are off the ground
You feel strong yet gentle
and I want to keep on dancing

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The eternity of 3 minutes and 49 seconds brings
my arms to fully embrace you
Feeling as if no one else is in our world
Our clothing caresses us and makes us warm
The song has ended the band left the stage for break
We still dance and hold each other hearing the music
still playing in our hearts

 ~

 

I cant remember how I felt without your arms around me...
it seems a lifetime ago
We are hypnotized by the eyes of the other
I see my future in yours
Do you see yours in mine?

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In your eyes I see a tear
like a crystal
the look of your life is joy
I know that in this face in this single tear
I see all I would ever need in life.

I lean into you
Kissing your lips softly
Breath almost non existent
Knees only held strong by determination
A speech forever thought of and practiced
Words rehearsed in a mirror
With a simple heart

 

Will you dance with me the rest of our lives?

Breath held and heart still
Waiting for your hopeful yes

 

 

My eyes well up with tears as I answer
Yes, I will be your partner the rest of our lives.

 

 

Author notes

Thank you again Al for the beautiful collaboration..It is so easy working with you....

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  • CherryOnTop
    January 18
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    OMG!!! I really can't tell you just how wonderful this poem is. Your words tell it all.


  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    lovely dance

    It never quite happened this way with me, wheni went to many dances, of course a different dance and tunes. nice write you rtwo. keep it going.

  • patsoldcat
    July 16, 2007

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    wow

    simply wow
    thank you for allowing me to work again with you on loves quest to find hearts that are one and united in ererity in a single dance, a single crystal of a tear, and a single answer of yes.

  • PoetsAngel
    July 16, 2007

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    Noreen this is the loveliest, sweetest, most romantic thing I have read for ages, it's just beautiful, I want more! I want to dance like this *hug* You and Patsoldcat have done a remarkable job.

     

     

    Cathy

    xxxxx


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    Dance of Forever

    ~~~Ahhh, so sweet, so romantic...would kill or give up a body part (ok not a body part but you get me) to have just ONE moment like this...the ending just clinched me..and held me staring at the words for a moment...a memory perhaps, from the past..this was one helluva romantic, sensual, intimate dance the two of you have done..Well done...elegant and eloquent...


  • markgrif gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Awww lovely work again from you 2 again

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