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New Experience

Dancing, rocking, to the beat
Smiling, laughing, not a clue
Then suddenly I feel the heat
I’m now grinding against you

Nerves set in at something new
Something I never thought I would
Not quite sure just what to do
All I know is this feels good

So I continue in my own style
My eyes glaze over with desire
Wanting you more all the while
My attraction for you burns like fire

Our bodies slow as music fades
I retain the thought of you and me
Wishing we didn’t have to part ways
But enjoying this feeling of ecstasy

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  • Aiyoris Maryian
    August 11, 2007

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    If this ever happened to me, I'd mess it up and step on the guy's toes. Besides, I don't know HOW to grind!!! Probably never will, either...


    • Snowflake11
      August 11, 2007
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      hey, I didn't know how to grind either. But theres not much you can do when someone just comes up behind you lol. I'm pretty sure I wasn't too great at it, but oh well, what do you expect for a first time right?


  • going nowhere
    July 20, 2007

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    im a little flustered after reading this...something i personally can't completely understand... but i guess the feeling of wanting to be with someone, i can understand.


  • robert bolin
    July 19, 2007

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    Deffinately pulls the reader into the passion of the heat of the moment that you have shared with all of us here, Beautifully passionate, and brilliantly penned thank you for sharing your work with us here on ap and allowing me to read and comment on your work.

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