Wings glistening
for Heaven's eyes.
Hovering
where we feel
alone,
protecting life
as Lord wills.
Especially,
when our head
is in sky
and feet
about to fall
in a hole.
A contest entry
- Angelic Encounters by ScarletO.
300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!
Powerful piece Sweetness
Love this one You have penned and so true about falling in a hole
I've seen a few hovering
Magnificent piece!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you sweetness for you kind thoughts and congratulations.
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Oh this is just beautiful
Such a truthful write about our guardain angels protecting us. I think mine does more overtime that he/she should lol
All the best with this
gaylene
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Thank you so much for the great comment.
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this is awesome. great depiction of a guardian angel and their job, always there, right in the nick of time
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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This was a very clever written poem. I especially like the part about falling in a hole. Good thing for guardian angels for sometimes we just don't know what we are doing down here in the world of confusion.
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