She talks to Jesus'
cause she feels so incomplete.
He's the only one, that she really needs.
She bows her head before him.
She gets down on her knees,
and begs him to forgive her please.
She prays to him to always stay,
and please don't ever go away,
cause he's every single breath' that she takes.
Chorus-Pt.One;
She talks to Jesus'
cause she feels so incomplete.
She begs him to forgive her,
as she falls down on her knees.
He calms and soothes her spirit'
cause she really needs to hear it,
when her mind, she just can't seem to clear.
She knows he's always there for her,
and she, he will never, ever hurt.
He helps her to lift all of those burdens.
To her, there is no other'
and she, he does shelter and cover.
I know, because that 'She, is Me'!
Chorus-Pt.Two;
She talks to Jesus
when she feels so incomplete.
She bows her head before him,
cause to her, he's all she ever needs.
Yes, she gets down on her knees'
because to her, he's all she ever needs.
He's all she ever needs.....................
A contest entry
- Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
800 points, ended July 29, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music = Life. by Beautifuly.Wasted.
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Please tell me what you think
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did you write this all bye yourself?
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Humm... I know how that feels. I get down on my knees sometimes and pray so hard my head spins. Though I dont totally share the same veiws of that song/poem... I can conect and understand where your coming from. I really liked your song/poem though- good stuff! Keep up the good work. Have a great day.... Shelly
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this would be an excellent religious song. inspiring write
best of luck & thanks for entering!
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Thank You Once Again
I Am So Glad U Liked MY Song/Poem. That's Exactly What I Ws Going To Do With it.Thank You So Much, For Your Wonderful, Kind, And Nice Comments On it.'God Bless You In Every Way'.Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo................
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Excellent Poem
your on a roll,Shirley you did a great job with this and I really liked it!You could sing this in a choir!I like reading your poems cause they always have a burst of attention to them.They bring excitement!Good rhythm and rhyme!Keep up the excellent writing,I hope to see more of these kinds of poems!You should enter this in a contest,I bet you would get a lot of responses,i know i liked it very much!Love your Sister Lisa K Haslett
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This is such a very sincere and emotional lyrics...the chorus is simply awesome...especially this one..."She bows her head before him, cause to her, he's all she ever needs..." I could totally relate to it...
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This would be a great song!
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