An angel from up above
that was sent to me
you have sowed my heart back together
brought the love back into my life
what it is you do?
makes me speechless
such a wonderful feeling
that has given to my heart
sun shines to warm my face
as you are here to hold me close
my head lies on your shouler
as you kiss my forehead
and whisper you love me
makes me melt
such a wonderful blessing
that I thankful for
each and every day
Author notes
sorry, it took me so long to write
A contest entry
- Angelic Encounters by ScarletO.
300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful. Thi had great imagery and detail. Nice job!
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This is a beautiful shaped angel poem,,,words fit so nicely with the theme. I like it a lot. but you unfortunately, did not post the rules for it is only 30 words. A beautiful none the less.
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wow, I really liked this! I loved how you said "makes me melt" because it really showed the feelings you had for this person...
Nice job... I loved this, and how you ended it with a bit about a blessing. Nice job!!!! I Loved this one!!!
~Girlfriend~
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i think this may be the best work i've ever...seen? lmao.
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haha I'm still working on the poem lol
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