Light, dark,
The days have no meaning
locked behind doors.
Author notes
Prompt: Monday
In a list
A contest entry
- 10,10,10, Quickie!!! by Gypsy-Princess.
410 points, ended July 15, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I know from my experiences with abuse that my mind wants to sleep to keep from remembering the past. Excellent write
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sort... but amazingly powerful... it implies so much in so few words... seriously not sure what I can say other than it is amazingly expressive and powerful
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this reminds me of child abuse and how the abused child wants to sleep in during the day whether it's light or dark, because of her abuse.
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This was a very sad and affecting piece on child abuse. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Oh Chelsea, this is heartbreaking. What an amazing talent you have. Beautiful, sorrowful piece. You touch both on the emotions and speak to the situation, demanding action.
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Oh what a dark and sad write. This is loaded with emotion.
All the best with this.
Gaylene
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Such a creative piece. Truly unique and immensely grasping. Great take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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awwwwwwwwww this is heart-wrenching...what a seriously unique way of looking at what we as a society call Monday, Blahhhh....and you have turned it into something less selfish...well done...Good luck! Should win for its uniqueness...I want to hug that lil girl..and then wash and brush her hair...and just love her..
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Your prompt is ~ MONDAY
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