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~Faded~

The colours of love fade
in the shape of a
lifeless party ~
long forgotten.

Blown away in winter's rush
taken from the hands
of a dreamer;
wishing for the past.

The night begins to fold
clawing its way down my spine
and into my soul,
leaving me weak.

Sitting on the edge of tomorrow
I let go of your memory
floating with the sting of my tears.
I can no longer breathe...

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  • Sle3p
    July 15, 2007
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    Great job and thank you for the entry on my contest i wish you good luck