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My All

And if, in spite of it, I gave you my all
would you take it?
would you take it?
Keep it safe and warm?
If, I gave it all
would you break it
would you let it fall?
If, inspite of it all
I gave you it all
i gave you MY all,
would you take it?
Dont fake it...
would you take it?
My Mr. Wonderful?
Im sendin' you my heart,
along with all of my love
Please send some back to me
so we will be
each others all...
yea
my evertything
my only thing
my
mr
wonder
full
If I give my all?

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  • torturedsoul9876
    July 16, 2007
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    I like this poem it is very open. I hope to read more of your work later on. If you would like you can check out some of mine and tell me what you think. I like criticism so be as critical as possible. Well i hope to talk to you sometime. Keep up the good work and god bless