Jeremiah,
This is all I've longed to say
I cant forget the years you enslaved
I still remember you looking at my childish face
You were in your own world with all this space
After four years of letting you touch and pry
It took another helpless little girl to speak out and die
A torture you brought threatening us both
A brother to us, our love is to hard to loathe
I tear up and run away from love in all ways
Afraid that you'll enter our body's another day
I cant sleep at night because I fear that your there
I love how our parents didn't even care
My body is weak I was only seven at the time
You took away my childhood like it wasn't even mine
A brother I loved and I thought I'd always trust
To a rapist who got away with far to much
My eyes flood over as I see the family you have now
And I wonder 'you? a family? what? why? and how?'
Author notes
This is very true and I've never expressed this in a poem before...i don't even like thinking about it..and I was on the verge of tears so though its unfinished it has to stop there
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this is a great poem it shows alot of emotion
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That was very deep.I can understand your grief.Not personally cuz I'm not you but in a meaning...Keep writing you're very good
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Oh my dear friend , this is intense!! I'm so sorry. -tears- I'm so sorry, I truly am. Im always here if you want to talk.
GL in the contest.
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Wow... all i can say is Wow... this is Masterfuly written the way you wrote it captured my attantion... very well written...
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I couldnt finish this one...I was in tears and just had to stop
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I have walked in those shoes only mine was from a friend of my fathers. The poem ending is great as is. It is an emotional time and I cried as I read it. this is such a emotional write but daughter I love you and I am here for you
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honestly there is so much more I wanted to say but I just dont talk about this part of my life at all... it hurts me too much... i lost so many memorys trying to forget this one and it hurts me more and more each time
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