ribbons from your fingers
encircle me with silken soft
first caressing length
then crossing back in strings
of sultry stay
enraptured by your feathered ropes
resilience rises in my breast
dismissing wanton disbelief
acquiescing whole to every distant hope
Author notes
Prompt: RIBBONS FROM MY FINGERS
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A contest entry
- Lucky 7 Quickie Deluxe PIF 7 / 9L / 20 min by Everwind Rising.
600 points, ended July 15, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this, but it should be longer with a better closing line.
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Beautiful write...wonderfully worded.
Harrishasm Minhas
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Ohhh this is beautiful hun, I loved the "of sultry stay"
gave me images of a corset being slowly undone. Wonderful imagery and fantastic metaphor. Gorgeous. Hugs, Bunny
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Wonderful!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win with Beautiful images and the feathered ropes ties it together
Thank You for sharing this!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is beautiful. The imagery is stunning as is your use of vowel and consonant sounds. The repetition of the "s" sound throughout mimicks so well the breathing sound associated with the imagined experience you have expressed in this poem. Lovely!
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