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All my Hopes

I tied all my hopes
to some twine
and some string.
Held them aloft
and gave them
their wings.
Will they fly?
Will they fall?
Will they soar
to the stars?
Will they crumble
and break
and shatter my heart?
I am frightened
I tied all my hopes
and set them all free,
praying someday,
they'd come back
to me.

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  • Sle3p
    July 15, 2007

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    great, this one had a great flow towards it and it was a little like a song i realy liked it thanks for the entry