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Simple Serenity

the wind blows softly,
the chimes ringing,
a bird nibbles
at the feeder.
grass as green
as emeralds bright,
sky as blue
as sapphire oceans.
she could not ask
for anything more
than this Simple Serenity,
but if she had to
she would only wish
that her gone away friend
was here to share
her Simple Serenity.

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I did what you suggested and looked out my window, of course I saw wind blowing in the wind chimes, and a bird was eating the seed in the feeder. so there it is, COMMENT!!

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  • bluecollarlove
    August 26, 2007
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    Nice

    Kind of takes you into dream land.