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She is gone now

She is gone now and I never knew
how deeply I would grieve
I am all alone without her-I
never thought she would leave

She asked us with a childish smile if we
could see her "pretty balloon"
It was like a knife in my heart and
I know she would be gone soon

She is gone now and I never knew
how deeply I would grieve
I am all alone without her-I
never thought she would leave

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  • Sle3p
    July 15, 2007

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    so sad...so good. Emotion is great and this poem showed it. I realy like it when a poem shows emotion besauce it makes me feel like the poem is better. Breat job!

    -maddie

    • acytra
      July 15, 2007
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      thank you

      It was a hard one to write....usually I can get something out pretty good to an image....but not when it reminds me of my mama....oh how I miss her......thank you so much for the contest..it gives me a chance to say outloud and to share the sad things and the happy things that I have yet to discuss. I appreciate you love here!