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The Dawning

half adorned in the robe
of what might have been

"what if"s lingering
on still tingling shoulders

"if only"s sweltering
in yet swooning mind

she marveled at the height
of her unanswered passion

pleasuring, at least,
in untapped capability's  discovery


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  • Desire gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Oy!

    This allows the Mind to ask questions and the Spirit to seek answers
    Powerful piece and taken from the contest picture Inspiration
    Wonderful!!

    Appreciate Your visit to my work!

    Best wishes to You
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Celticmoon
    July 15, 2007

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    So many thoughts left to wonder in the mind. This is so true to life for so many. Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel

  • Celticmoon
    July 15, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Flirtatiously Shy



    Or


    The picture on the main page