one day
I'll fly
up high
in the sky
with wings of a butterfly
one day I'll be
what I want
all the past
is not my fault
our dreams
are what we create
failure
oh,this I really hate
am having new start
where fears and worries are apart
from my life
no more failure to thrive
no more pain
no tears as heavy as rain
no more minutes wasted in vain
no more care
nor love
not for those who don't care
and to love back they dont dare
the butterfly touch from them is far
the butterfly whispered to me
one day you'll be
believe
and you'll achieve
fly with gentle pretty wings
just like mine
and you'll be just fine
some people might be blind to see
the beauty within thee
but just set your soul free
fly away
with wings of a butterfly
touch souls with a butterfly's magic
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Who Has the Most HMs? Trade Your Green up for Gold! by ea.
300 points, ended November 19, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for letting me read your lovely poem. Although you don't have enough green trophies to qualify for this contest, I still hope to see something from you on ways to reduce global warming over in the other one.
Good luck!
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Very nice
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A nice use of the idea about butterfly wings, and the magic that a soul can bring. This is very thoughtful, thank you so much for your entry.
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Beatifully expressed
Sweet rose you did this write so well. I was a little sad. You are a beautiful and wonderful person. Just take life one day at a time. I love the way you expressed your feeling.
(LISA)
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