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Muah, sweetie

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There's this woman I met on this site called AP,
she's a sweetie and sexy lonely as can be.
Now your looking for a family and I'm up for grab's.
I'm not real demanding but I do love to gab.
So I'm offering my poetic love for you to have.
I'll be your sweetie if you want me to,
just be your neighbor, if a lover wont do.
I'm sassy, and funny, but can be serious too,
just give me a chance, 'cause I already luv U.
You talk about oddballs, but I take the cake,
I'm wacky and goofy, I've been called a flake.
But dont listen to them, they dont know what they say,
pick me as your lover we already play.


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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 10, 2007

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    well i definately see why you won gold.
    This definately had me swooning until i realzied..doesnt even matter does it.
    Wonderful write.
    Tory


  • delightfulmess gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    LOL Nice advertising sweetie LOL
    This was very cute.
    Hope it worked

    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x Greeters member
    July 16, 2007

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    lol. scott....you are a nutter....there is no denying it...so dont even consider it . but your also sweet at heart caring for others with open arms. i loved the poem made me smile and laugh. it was very cute and awsome. well done and best of luck


  • poetsruletheworld
    July 15, 2007

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    I can't for the life of me figure who it was that wrote this....*rolls eyes* To say I am touched and moved would be an understatement, I was also amused as well. I believe you already know the answer to this, if you don't, you haven't been paying enough attention..


  • pattyann4500
    July 15, 2007
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    Oops! Forgot this.


  • pattyann4500
    July 15, 2007

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    This is adorable! And, of course, the picture is so cute! Loved it. Good luck in the contest, Scott. Hugs, Patricia


  • cheaphotelsign
    July 15, 2007

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    if she doesn't take you up on the offer, look me up! this is great! love the flow. way cool!!


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 15, 2007

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    awwwwwwww this is so cute and so endearing my friend and i would say a pretty precise picture of the real you best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

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