Crimson light laughed~
changed to envious green;
summoned car, continue forward
but felt body frozen
with weight on foot
pressed to brake.
Truck plowed through-
...missed my extinction by minutes.
Author notes
Prompt: Angelic Encounters
Thirty words ONLY!
In a list
A contest entry
- Angelic Encounters by ScarletO.
300 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful.. i had simialr idea but cudnt put in words.. great write
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Thank you for this wonderful entry. I wonder if this was a coincidence or an act of an angel? Many would say coincidence, but that is what the crimson evil guy would want us to think. We all know the true forces when we live through them.
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wow, intense
yeah, i guess this would definitely be an angelic encounter best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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OK, You beat me hands down!! This is fantastic!!! What a great job you did on this one!!! WOW!!!!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and much love always
Nettie
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