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Fades Away

Missing image
Locked away without any hope
An evil sorceress placed her here
Day after day, struggling to cope
as her life slowly disappears

Envy and jealousy caused this fate
she'd never hurt as much as a fly
Even with this curse she doesn't hate
just not understanding why

The only way to break the evil spell
is for her to kill her beloved
She would prefer the agony of hell
by ending her own life instead

So she bears the curse with dignity
for her beloved she prays everyday
Sending a note to set his heart free
then she totally fades away

Author notes

This picture courtesy of Victoria Frances

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  • Namita
    August 4, 2007

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    Beautifully penned. Best of luck in the contest.

    Luv,
    Candy
    Contest Holder


  • penman gold member
    July 16, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. A great poem for the photo.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 15, 2007

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    JeannieD,

    First off, Thank you for your entry in my contest =]

    Second, I love this write. The sheer love and strength of a woman for her partner is just astounding and knows no bounds and you have expressed that here =] Love it !!!

    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda