It's been six years since you died,
all I do is sit and cry,
everyday is still the same,
I sit and cry my life's a game.
When you died,
I died, too,
It fucked sucks,
I love you.
It hurts so bad,
you haven't a clue,
please kill me and I'll thank you.
My life is empty I smile so fake,
reason why this life I can't take.
I am tired of living life,
I want to go,
go to you forever so.
It't time for me to open the door,
I hate my life straight to the core.
I live in hell,
day after day,
here I come my love,
with you I'll stay.
A contest entry
- How You Live!?!? by Felony 143.
700 points, ended July 19, 2007, 4 entries
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Comments
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This is sad but you shouldn't miss one so much...What I mean by that is..whoever you lost would want you to be happy, or at least live. Life is such a precious thing even though you don't see it.
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Whoa..
Totally kick ass write! I feel ya .. -
very powerful
love the line it's time for me to open the door, I hate my life straight to the core.. excellent...totally consumes the reader... great write.. good luck in the contest...
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