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Suicide

Thoughts throbbing in my mind
flooding in and
pulsating, pulsating, pulsating
images of razor blades
eyes fixated on nothing
scarlet-colored water in the porcelain tub
overflowing
spilling on the tiled floor
a single tear
rolling down a soft cheek
slit wrists
with scarlet dripping out
(pulsating,pulsating, pulsating)
anger, hate imbedded in my heart
so tired, so tired.
razors, blood, the scent of death
look at all the hurt...
(pulsating, pulsating, pulsating)
...do you see it's burning smile?
suicide.

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  • heartdripsblack
    July 15, 2007
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    this was such a sad, sad poem. but beautifully written. ~ hdb.