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Missing You

Your scent still lingers
As does the taste of your kiss
The feel of your embrace
The feeling of bliss

My arms are feeling empty now
My eyes seem to be lacking shine
I'd give anything
If I could rewind time.

I see forever in your eyes
Feel a sense of security in your arms
Like nothing could ever come between us
With you, nothing could cause harm

Your scent still lingers
As does the taste of your kiss
The feeling of your embrace.
The feeling of bliss.

Author notes

Hmm, I just can't seem to write like I used to. I guess I have to be extrememly depressed or angry to write a good poem these days.

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  • Somebodys Hero
    July 15, 2007

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    I dont think you have to be extrememly depressed or angry to write a good poem I think you write good reguardless. Its...Muy bonita! I love it!


  • thecatinthehat
    July 15, 2007
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    I like it! Well done!