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Soul's Apart

Falling Forward,
Towards The end.
Knowing Never,
My heart will mend.

You told me once,
To leave you alone,
Now I've changed,
Cold as a stone.

Again you're here,
yelling in my face.
Twenty-one year's,
I've strayed from grace.

I won't return,
I've seen the lie's.
No one's here,
My heart now cries.

Author notes

I wrote this after just being reminded of the worst relationship in my life.

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  • angelsslayer
    July 15, 2007

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    Good. I like the emotion, Its portrayed really well. I like the short verses, they are quite effective..

    Just a typo- it should be "cries" at the end.