There was once a place of
solace where life began and
wisdom itself, too, knew where
to start another chapter
Yet right here, the feet dared
not to journey on account of
not requesting protection against
it, the outside world
And affectivity, itself, bridged
another meaning of self proclamation
underneath this valley
...Right now, it feels incompleted
A contest entry
- Friends Are Forever 2 ~ For My AP friends Only~ by Angel With No Halo.
800 points, ended July 26, 2007, 7 entries
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I completely forgot to add HM's so I really screwed up.. I am so sorry.. you were supposed to get an HM
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Sometimes, and this is what I thought whilst reading this, we have a point in life where we stop dead in our tracks.. to scared to move forward.. yet we cannot turn back.. so we wait.. for something new to find us.. it is like waiting in line for a simple glass of water.. (easier than just walking up and taking it.. right?) This was a very insightful write for me.. it made me think that life is just merely to short to wait .. we need to keep walking.. or we cannot live. Thank you for entering sweety!!
Love,
~Krys~
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just wanted to know who this is... for the sake of needing to send an IM to those who have not yet entered Please leave your name in the auth comments thanks hon.
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This is really good... OMG... I love it... it was one I totally understood yet it was still deep! Rock on! xoxo meg
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this kind of reminds me of this quote i once read somewhere, but i can't right now remember it word for word, but i think this is a strong poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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