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rock me (brutally)

honey it's late
but that's alright
good news darlin
i'm feeling tight
rock me smooth
and rock me right
rock all day
and rock all night

i don-no what to do
when you get outa line
dozens of roses and
white lighted wine
wear a dresden cloak
one more time
bomb me right
outa my mind

love me brutally
hurt me right

pistol whip me
baby try a 45
i like to feel
like i'm uh-live
is there ah-something
you thought i should uh said
or do i simply rattle like
a bullet in your head

i don't know what i do
when i'm outa line
buy a dozen roses
and a white lighted wine
pistol whip me baby
try a 45
it's almost like
i'm alive

so take me on home
and treat me right
keep me forever or
just one night
just be sure to rock me smooth
and rock me right
God knows you're outta sight

just love me
bru-tal-leeeeee

Author notes

as i write this i hear white lightning wine by heart rocking through my brain. power ballads fo-eva

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  • draagyn
    July 17, 2007
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    woot


  • dustookie2
    July 15, 2007

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    WOW what can i say you have it all here just want to hear the music behind this song. flows smoothly from the page with ease just takes the reader along for the ride and what a ride. thank you for the pleasure got a few lines stuck in my head bugger .....very nicely crafted