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Love is.....

"Love is ...
    a gift to treasure"
    never to be bought or sold
    by any measure.
    a symbol of peace to behold.

Love is ...
    the cheer upon your smile
    that chases away my sorrow
    if even for a short while.
    looking forward to tomorrow.

Love is ...
    the sparkle within your eyes
    of an everlasting glow,
    like stars in the skies.
    a feeling only you and I know.

Love is ...
    the magic spoken from heart to heart
    where passion's fire reigns.
    feeling warmth and trust from the start
    cursing rampantly through our veins

"Love is ...
    a gift to treasure"
    lasting for all infinity
    in which time can't measure.
    blessing us always by the trinity
   
   
   
   

     

Author notes

POW

I got the idea of the write from the following quote:
"Love is a gift to treasure." - author unknown

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • StarEyes
    December 29, 2008

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    I see why this has both a gold and silver! This is amazing! I love your wording here sis! This is breathtaking! and you know it fits! What a great job! I love it!

    Congrats on the trophies!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • warrior-eagle
    October 14, 2007

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    blessing us always by the trinity


    Fantastic!
    This was a great write. I loved it.period.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    July 17, 2007

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    Brilliant

    This is a brilliant poem of love a very well deserved silver in the contest all my best wishes Brian.


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Watch out for the 20 line MAX!!!

    Next time, I will count EVERY line....even if it is a *Lead*

     

    If you have received this message, then your

    Write will be considered for the Finals list ~

    I want to thank you for participating

    in the First *POW*, and I hope to see your Quill

    brush us some more strokes next weekend ~

    Very nice job ~

    Bear ~

    "Love is ...
        a gift to treasure"
        lasting for all infinity
        in which time can't measure.
        blessing us always by the trinity


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Precious,

    This poem is sure filled with tunes of love.
    I adore how you express your tender heart and soul.
    Thanks for this inspirational piece Stardust-luvr.
    Keep up the wonderful writes, shine on sweetie!


    -Timothy


  • Candy6
    July 15, 2007
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    I like it

    A well written poem.

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