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Among The Sound and The Fury

You forgot to take with you all the memory
And I remained among the sound and the fury
of your lingering part within me.
Every drop of shattered dream
Used to bleed within me and scream.

You forgot to look back
And I kept standing among the rocks
of pain those I chose once.
Tears do smile in the eyes of life
And pains want to come out through the lips.






Author notes

The phrase "the sound and the fury" has been taken from William Faukner's Famous novel "The sound and the fury".

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  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    July 16, 2007
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    I liked your poem.


  • Venugopal gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    A good poem indeed Shapla. You remaind alone on the rocks amidst soun and fury. A great imagery you penned here..thank you for sharing


  • Melodies
    July 15, 2007

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    Oh, I am so sorry for the painful forgetting and I am thinking that you have had your share because your poem is filled with such images!