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Riddle Me This

I dance around you,
I embrace you're breath,
I hold you close,
From miles off,

I'm every color,
You cannot see,
I seem to flow,
And shake the trees,

I scream with fury,
And whisper too,
Speed makes me whistle,
As I call to you,

I carry scents,
Though have none of my own,
You breath me in,
And let me go,

I taste your lips,
And make you sigh,
I cool you down,
What am I?

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I was feeling creative....

In a list

Can you guess what I am?

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  • Whispered Devotions
    August 16, 2007

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    The wind!

    Hehe I loved this to pieces. First what am I poem I've ever read an I ADORE it!


    Amy


    • Salig Flicka
      August 16, 2007
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      Thank you! And yes! Pretty much anyways...wind/air...Thanx again!

      ~Avan~


  • Lord Dracon
    August 6, 2007
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    Beautifully written, nice flow to your words, it is the air of course, nicely done!


  • forgotten15pain
    July 25, 2007
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    awesome

    I really like the flow.
    Awesome work.


  • Naznomarn
    July 15, 2007

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    My guess is too embarrassing to say So I won't!
    By the way... How's the pet rock doing? Nicely polished?
    Not too craggy and mossy I presume...


  • Snow White Queen
    July 15, 2007
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    umm

    is this about a certain sumone who u told me about?

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