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colors of love]

colors swirl as lips meet
red of lust and heat
desire builds a rainbow true
embraces bring on every hue
'til climax stars burst free

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  • Rele anmwe
    July 15, 2007
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    Are you talking about our lips, hehe, just kidding, this is a very soothing piece. Kissing is always good, the art of swiping spits and drinking someone else' spit really takes strong guts and courage. I love the flow of the piece. Keep up the good work and best of luck to you.


  • tawk gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Such a beautiful and sensual write. So full of wonderful imagery