Time to overthrow the heavens was here,
using the pain and sorrow of damned souls,
Satan manifests a platform of fire.
An army of demons called out the charge.
As the fires of hell lift up in the sky,
pushing up with incredible power,
like an eruption from a volcano.
The hellions readied their stalwarth strike.
Celestial beings prepared for battle,
as heaven's gate shook with mighty force.
Call to duty, as angels sound the horns;
drawing their steel swords the angels defend.
Darkness rises up to engulf the light,
as demons penetrate the sturdy gate.
Lightning flashes from clash of the swords.
Discontent of the downcast rages on.
Satan uses all his power and spells
to weaken the angels fearless virtue.
The war for heaven in sickening sound,
rips right through the calm of a moonlit night.
Caught in-between earth will suffer foremost,
for the rage and envy of the wicked,
as the battle they will certainly lose,
rumbles and roars with terrible ire.
And Lucifer will cry his tears of loss,
when heaven once more reigns triumphantly.
His evil intent will shudder and die,
in resounding hallelujah chorus.
As tears of heaven echo for the slain,
the battle raged through the day and night,
Angels guide gives confidence of the win,
pushing the demons back to where they belong.
Back into darkness, to languish below,
the army of light sent minions of hell,
in cries of hurt and of tormented pain,
the devilish uprising comes to an end.
Author notes
Collaboration by Malicai & Kahliya
prompt:
"It was as though the devil himself wept tears of pure sound." -Phantom by Susan Kay
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it was one of the best poem i ever read
but I think you missed spell a word
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this is one of the deepest satain poem
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wow, this is an incredible and very powerful poem. both of you did an outstanding job with the prompt. I personally like the last 2 stanzas. great, absolutely great job.
kat
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an enjoyable read, quite the epic! Awesome imagery throughout. Glad to see good won over evil! lol
Rory -
this was a great write. Keep up the good work.
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Great write! with much vivid imagery. I like the pic also. His evil intent will shudder and die, in resounding hallelujah chorus...I love those lines. Good luck in the contest,
love ya sis,
sassy
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Very powerful write! Wonderful use of your imagination. I also believe the backgound gives your write more realization. I wish you gold with this write.
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wicked!!
totally awesome picture to go with a awesome background and a even more awesome penning!!
loved the take on the prompt~ who else would have thought to write on the DEVIL himself!
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This is WOW!
W icked
O utstanding
W onderful
A great read.
hugs onesuagr
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I like the pic by the way
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Well well I think this is one we can both be very proud of - thank you for the collab and your take on the prompt! I had fun fun fun. You have an amazing talent.
Best of luck
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