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Joy Ride

Driving in
this car is fun.
Watch out poochies
I'm on the run.

Just cruising
for the chick dogs.
There's plenty,
I'm not a hog.

Oops,
was supposed to stop.
Time to outrun
this here cop.

Speeding
like a fienidh hound.
Broke the law,
thrown in the pound. *whimper*

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  • Melodies silver member
    July 16, 2007

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    Hey, what fun! I love the dialogue! Doggy Dialogue!

  • acytra gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    love it!

    soooo cute....yes I love this !!!

  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    well, this is what happens as foot is placed too hard upon the metal. or you could have become a fatality and they scooped you up off the freeway or tree or someplace.


  • Parearoo
    July 15, 2007

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    I love it!!! You did an outstanding job! For such a small, short poem, you sure are getting/going to get alot of huge laughs!! Keep up the great work, and good luck in this contest!


  • tawk gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    You made me laugh and I can picture this happening Great job with the picture I just love it

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