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" I'll Love You Forever "

Have you ever
promised
that when the sunlight turns to ash
that when the moonlight glitter fades
that when the stars forget to fall
You will burn and shine
battling the depths of hell
for one glimpse of heaven
?

Author notes

Most of these poems are ending up about love..go figure. lolz.

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  • DancingRed
    July 24, 2007

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    Mmm, more beautiful poetry.
    I love the imagery in this piece; it's stellar.
    Did you mean 'glimpse' though?
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • tawk gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    I can so relate. When you find love you hope that it will last forever, sometimes it does and others it just does not work out for the best. You have captured these feeling so well in your poem