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Without You

Have you ever felt passion
scolding as the sun
with no one around
to watch you burn?
Wishing even one day
could be as bright
as this lonely midnight

Author notes

I miss him <3 =]

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  • DancingRed
    July 24, 2007

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    Yeah. You're words tell this feeling in such an amazing way. Such a beautiful, powerful piece; your emotions are expressed brilliantly.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • tawk gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    I could feel all your pain and emotions throughout your write. I am sorry that you are going through this. I am here if you ever need too talk