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Last Words . .

Solute Allpoetry . . home of prose and rhyme
You’re welcome to browse . . if you have time
We’ve poured out our hearts . . in pen and ink
And we’d love to know . .  just what you think
It’s a supreme effort . . in collective rhyme
Some commonplace . . and some sublime
If you’re not impressed . . we won’t make amends
It’s been great fun . .  and we’ve made new friends
And so dear reader . . it’s now your call
Thanks for reading . .  and God Bless you all !

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  • Killerzombies
    March 30, 2008

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    i love this poem. it is creative and flows magically. Outstanding rhyme and wtg on the honorable mention for it.

  • Ellis gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    GOOD

    Like the unique way you did this
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  • Daizy21
    September 23, 2007

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    This is soooo sweet!wow,I like a lot, you captured all our thoughts in just a few lines.Thankyou for that and thank you for sharing.

  • HeavenScent4U
    August 15, 2007

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    wonderful addition to the tapestry, very fitting for it for it tells the readers about everything there is to know about us here at AP be well and be blessed

  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    August 12, 2007
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    Sweet.

    A warm and embracing piece that welcomes one and all.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 7, 2007
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    This is great and a fond tribute to AP, as well as a wonderful ending rhyme to all the stanzas. I loved this poem. It makes this community feel like one of the best places to be to read and write poetry. Thanks Albert for rounding things off for us all.


    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 15, 2007

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    ????? This is wonderful and being used as the end rhyme. But you already added it a couple of days ago. LOL
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