You abused me till I was on the brink of death
You beat me till I had no breath
Mother is a title earned, not given
What caused you to torture me? How where you driven?
But when the call came I despaired all the same
Identifiying your body was not a fun game
At your funeral I wept with grief
The man who stole your life was a terrible thief
Though now as the tears still fall
I choose to love you with my all
Author notes
I chose option #9
And for xAngelx4xLife's contest, I chose option #8
A contest entry
- ♥ Withstanding The Pain ♥ ....................... ♥-||Dedicated to my Mother||-♥ by Bruised.Roses.
450 points, ended July 24, 2007, 15 entries
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Honorable mention
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Aw, what a mix of emotions that must have been.
This was really good. In some ways I can relate to this a lot...
Kari
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wow
this is a great poem about forgivness no matter what, and i love it, well done, and good luck! -
Aww, this is such a sad write. Though I do like how you still loved your mother even though she did all those things to you. Well done. Best of luck to you in the contest.
xAngelx4xLif -
This is soo deep so sad and so perfect for what i was asking i loved it ....great job ..and good luck
~in love in death~ -
This is soo deep so sad and so perfect for what i was asking i loved it ....great job ..and good luck
~in love in death~ -
this was so beautiful...and I can relate to this.....you did an excelent job on portraying the pain and emotions through your words, amzing job keep writting
xox
Tash
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