Remembering when I first met you, it was through a group
Adding me on myspace, you let me know you're ther if you need me
No one ever made me feel so welcomed, online or real life
Evry time I saw you on, I would say hi. Asking about your day.
I can always come to you, given the day or time.
Kindess you have to no end showing me that there are others care
Always there to listen and write back
Valentino is her name. Filled with compassion and love, having no
Apparently showing no shame.
Loving nature, and a true friend. Not that many would understand
Even though we know on the net, our friendship grows forever yet
Nights we talk about problems, boys, and anything.
Truly you are like a sister to me. You are gifted in many ways.
Insiring in several ways. So involved with friends and things
Nothing but joy on this day it brings.
Oh and by the way, did I tell you happy birthday?
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANEIKA
A contest entry
- Raneika's Birthday Bash and Anything Goes Contest! (STILL OPEN!!!!!!!!!!!) by Ms Raneika.
436 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely write. You describe the setting well. A great tribute for a birthday
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this is sweet of you
i hope whoever this was about had a wonderful birthday
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Brandi -
SUCH a sweet poem! Beautifuly written nad very very good.
LOVE IT.
Keep writing and God Bless
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awwww thats sooo cute!!! and what a great birthday present!
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Awww Samantha! Thanks Girl! I could care less if you wrote one line...anything from you expressing you appreciation towards me is great...very great! so I thank you for being the friend you are and takin' the time to write such a write...much love, Raneika
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I am glad you liked it. I have no idea what to call it, and i will paste it as soon as i get to my house. I hope you had a great birthday. ttyl
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This is a wonderful birthday present and I'm sure she'll love it!
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awwww....so sweet...this is a great birthday pressie...it's a little choppy, so maybe you could adjust your line breaks a bit, but its still very sweet...I think that she'll like it very much
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