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This Dark Night

Terror filled thoughts on this dark night
No comfort can be found
Crying here, I shake with fright

Walking my path there is no light
Not a single sound
Terror filled thoughts on this dark night

Though as I walk I have no sight
I sense that around
Crying here, I shake with fright

This horrible feeling I cannot fight
I hate it when I am this tightly wound
Terror filled thoughts on this dark night

Twisting jaws that gnash and bite
Huddled for warmth on this cold mound
Crying here, I shake with fright

Scared as I am, I do as I might
Wandering lost my soul unbound
Terror filled thoughts on this dark night
Crying here, I shake with fright

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  • Dead Hair
    July 28, 2007
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    I love how this is her path, spiraling down into darkness. Very emotional, striking and real.