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Your Dear Mirror

I am your mirror
I reflect you so clearly
But when you don't like your reflection
I pay the price
Now shattered glass
I still reflect
You feel I am to blame
But I am just doing what come naturally
Now thrown out
I do take a sigh
What a rotten life

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  • TheDevilInYourHead
    July 29, 2007

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    Short but to the point. This was done very well in the few lines that you wrote. And it shows a lot of emotion. Fantastically done. Thank you for entering.


  • suicidal-revenge
    July 20, 2007
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    very unique i like how you are in the perspective of the mirror

    -suicidal revenge-


    • LadyOfFate
      July 20, 2007
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      Yes, I was doing my perspective, but ended up being a mirror. how did I get inanimate?


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    awsome write so full of thoughts and wonders and emotions. it really made me think about my own life. a wonderful write well done

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